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is this paragraph gramatically correct?

dari 17colors, 21 September 2010

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mjdh1957 (Tunjukkan profil) 21 September 2010 10.58.00

I would change the last part to 'trovi la dolcxan cxerizon.

Because, 'ili preferas rompi..., kaj trovi'